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Sit and wait...

im telling you
im trying my best
but what do i do
when i just cant
im making it though this world
with so many ups and downs
but im telling you
im trying my best
but i just cant
it hurts me to say
what im doing won't change
"i know its hard"
my friends say
"but you're gonna be ok..
tell me how
what can i do to help you"
nothing i say
nothing will help this time
im sorry it just won't
i got to help myself
just sit and wait
and see what magic i can make

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i like writing poems where people can make it match like there life... where people can relate...

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  • in-the-twilight
    January 30, 2007

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    There are plenty of things I relate this to in my life... like crushes... getting over failure and rejection... things like that. My friend has gone through this with suicidal stages. Whatever it is you wrote this for... you know I'm always here to listen! Just a message away! Luv ya! Rock on! xoxo Meg