drivin to liverpool
cant see for rain
comin to see you
well chuffed again
thinkin of marsielles
and benicassim
comin to see you
some sort of dream
drinkin cuba libra
in bar fifty eight
comin to see you
hope i'm not late
climbin up mountains
swimmin in lakes
comin to see you
the sound of music
chocolate and racolat
pilatus in blue
its been too long baby
comin to see you
A contest entry
- rite me a poem for the one u luv by a means to an end.
385 points, ended February 15, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a very orignal poem far differently written tan many others i have read. great write
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eeh, am suyin' another side t ee fingers, quite the romantic, very good write once again auld son,
well done and good luck in the contest,
beefcake
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Love it
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How cute. I liked it.
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