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The Truth

I see her
I feel her
I need her
But I cannot have her love
She doesn't even know how I truely feel:
I'm in love
I fell for her immediately
And she doesn't know it
Because I'm a coward
I'm afraid of her answer
I'm afraid she doesn't feel the same
How can she?
She's everything I'm not:
She's beautiful
She's loving
She's sweet
She's strong
She'll listen
Truely listen
And me?
I'm none of these things
Why can't I get the courage
To tell her how I feel?
To tell her how much I love her?
To tell her what she means to me?
To tell her the truth?

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  • Of you
    February 19, 2007
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    Awwww just so touching and very true, the love we feel for that someone, how are we so afraid to tell them...
    This is just so amazing, in the most honest way
    Follow always your heart



  • WatchtowerBurning
    January 30, 2007

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    Love this poem , and thanks for your comment on Dusken RAys. I hope others enjot this poem . Who's it about by the way


    • wish you loved me
      January 31, 2007
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      someone i am in love with... she doesnt know it tho... like i said
      "I'm a coward
      I'm afraid of her answer
      I'm afraid she doesn't feel the same"
      no way she does... we're friends, but i want to be sooo much more!