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Dirt, Dead Men, and Dog Tags (unfinished)

complete with a rising sun
and inherited fear
it was only a signature
that brought me here

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I had to save my progress so I could ex out of the window - not done.

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  • Evolutionary
    September 16
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    I finished this poem once. It was beautiful. But I lost it. Damn it all.