Im deeply, Im cold.
Sometimes the years seem old.
Older than they really are.
Countless times reminded of how rare.
Honestly. Not one person like me.
Sun will rise upon this to be.
My opinions are stubborn.
Sooner rather than later you'll learn.
Im not a machine to be torn.
Not science mind, just dragged and worn.
A riddle? Teach, please teach.
To study rather than preach, preach.
Not glass. No. I just break.
Dont steal my gifts I make.
My pride, Its there. I swear.
Run. Hide. Only sometimes I bear.
A girl is human. Not perfect.
Time will accept. As well as reject.
My name is like a number placed in a box.
Listen. Just listen. My key, it unlocks.
Please tell me what you think
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I really like the emotion in this piece-and I like the different points you express all at once; it is complicated.
Not glass. No. I just break.
Dont steal my gifts I make.
My pride, Its there. I swear.
Run. Hide. Only sometimes I bear.
A girl is human. Not perfect.
Time will accept. As well as reject.
My name is like a number placed in a box.
Listen. Just listen. My key, it unlocks
this is amazing, and I uber wish that you'd write more! keep it up!
pegleg -
I really really like this.
Great write!
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