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That's When I Know

When your stupid comments make me laugh,
When I don't need a reason to smile,
When everything seems normal,
And I'm happy for a while.

When we talk rubbish most of the time,
When you smile at me & I don't know why,
When I know that you care,
And you can't even explain why.

When we know each other inside out,
When we've been here before,
And no matter what we say,
We can never ignore.

When I can remember what it was like,
And now I know what it was,
When you laugh at me for no other reason,
When you smile just because.

When we insult the other & make little jokes,
When it doesn't matter what we do,
That's when I know,
That I fell for you.

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  • shore-fire555
    January 30, 2007

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    :)

    hey hunni great poem i rather do like it, it reminds me of stuff anyways hope ur mums bday goes gr8 and yeh you dont need to come in school on fri coz mogey said we rnt doin the cswk but yay we back friends!!! btw i hope to god you didnt write this wif jamie in mind lol
    huggs and abit of a smile yours truly without a lie davey man


  • ForsakenDreams
    January 29, 2007

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    Awwww! Thats so cute! I love it girl. I can't wait to read more! I'm so glad to see you writing happy stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ILY

  • exzimbo
    January 29, 2007

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    :)

    very nice, btw u need to edit the line 'when we insult each other' it should read 'when I insult you' keep writing! luv cabbage xxx