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Rusalka

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Rusalka


O how I love gazing into
the still moonlit pool
I bask in the reflection of my own radiant beauty


The fire of my emerald green eyes
slice thru the blanket of fog
as each stroke my brush
lends a lustrous sheen to my seductive mane

You approach...

My transparent gown
flows about me as I flit to the meadow;
for my unholy waltz of enticement

My solitary voice wailing the irresistible...

      Symphony of seduction

Hypnotically your essence is drawn to me
as my succulent breasts impale you in our embrace
You are deplumed of will as we immerse...

in the watery abyss of lust

your chest burning with the fire of suffocation
as the key is revealed

to Hades and your eternal damnation

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 Demons

 

Turn the music on while reading this poem (just under my avatar)

Rusalka
Wikipedia In Slavic mythology, a rusalka (plural:rusalki) was a female ghost, water nymph, succubus or mermaid-like demon that dwelled in a waterway.
According to most traditions, the rusalki were fish-women, who lived at the bottom of rivers. In the middle of the night, they would walk out to the bank and dance in meadows. If they saw handsome men, they would fascinate them with songs and dancing, mesmerise them, then lead the person away to the river floor, to live with them. The stories about rusalki have parallels with the Germanic Nix and the Irish banshee. See Slavic fairies for similar creatures.


Origin
In most versions, the rusalka is an unquiet dead being, associated with the "unclean force." According to Zelenin, people who die violently and before their time, such as young women who commit suicide because they have been jilted by their lovers, or unmarried women who are pregnant out of wedlock, must live out their designated time on earth as a spirit.
The ghostly version is the soul of a young woman who had died in or near a river or a lake and came to haunt that waterway. This undead rusalka is not invariably malevolent, and will be allowed to die in peace if her death is avenged.
Rusalki can also come from unbaptized children, often those who were born out of wedlock and drowned by their mothers for that reason. Baby rusalki supposedly wander the forest begging to be baptized so that they can have peace. They are not necessarily innocent, however, and can attack a human foolish enough to approach them.


Description
While her primary dwelling place was the body of water in which she died, the rusalka could come out of the water at night, climb a tree, and sit there singing songs, sit on a dock and comb her hair, or join other rusalki in circle dances (Russian: хороводы, Polish: korowody) in the field.
Though in some versions of the myth, the eyes shine like green fire, others describe them as extremely pale, with no visible pupils, such as in the famous Ivan Bilibin drawing. Her hair is sometimes depicted as green, and often perpetually wet. According to some legends, should the rusalka's hair dry out, she will die.
Rusalki like to seduce men. They can do so by enticing men with their singing and then drowning them. Men seduced by the rusalka could die in her arms, and in some versions hearing her laugh could also cause death.

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  • Tirrell
    December 28, 2008

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    This reminds me of a short story I wrote for the united ameture press, they had said it was deprave and not wholesome. I find much beauty and strength inside this poem. Wonderfully dark and delightful.


  • Myjoy gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    I love this, my Fav. legends. I as just blown away b the depth and easy read of this poem. It is perfection to me as for the way it read, the topic, and just pure liking it. Thank you for sharing.


  • nordicsky silver member
    March 28, 2008

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    What a wonderful piece of writing. You managed to include so many details of the Rusalka legend and use amazing descriptive language. I liked the idea of including music, a real work of art.

    I’m off to bed; I hope I don’t dream of homicidal water nymphs

    Thanks for posting this.
    Kind regards, Peter


  • Ithica silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    I feel no need to comment on your talent, EVER! But I am increasingly impressed by your crafting such bewitching poetry from these wanton women of myth. You fill each verse with fact yet sprinkle them with dark and seductive romance... wow!


  • RedAquarius
    June 14, 2007

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    "unholy waltz of enticement", "deplumed of will", and "succulent breasts impale you" - these phrases leapt out at me and kept pulling me back to them to re-read. Great job!


  • CarCrashHumor
    March 16, 2007

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    vixen.

    again, I love the whole woman-demon thing you have going on...


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    February 26, 2007

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    That is so doggone pretty Damnation almost looks good!! I love to mix hot vixen sizzle with heavy fire power evil, such a potent mix! Loved this too, but Mara was scarier!
    xxoo
    dk


  • Shiro Okami
    February 24, 2007
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    The word 'thru' puts me off rather. Through?


  • richiesnana
    February 23, 2007
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    A WORK OF ART

    This is a work of art, poetic beauty at it best.

    Good luck in the contest!


  • Shiro Okami
    February 22, 2007
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    It's good. Dark. Interesting facts.


  • Dark Soul Reaper
    February 16, 2007

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    Very powerful write. You really have a talent, nay, calling to capture the spirit of what you write in your words. This is a great write. I'll enjoy reading more and more of your work.


  • Aeonna
    February 11, 2007

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    WONDERFULLY DARK

    i love the part: reflection of my own radiant beauty
    The fire of my emerald green eyes
    slice thru the blanket of fog
    as each stroke my brush lends a lustrous sheen to my seductive mane.

    WOW, KEEP IT COMING... FABULOUS WRITE

    FLEUR DE ROSA

  • enigma-78
    January 29, 2007

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    I'm inpressed, you have penned an exelent write here on a legend. showing her for what she is nicely, her vanity, charm, beauty and her darker side. As usual you have painted a vivid picture in the mind with your amazing words...


  • Baahltres
    January 29, 2007

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    Wow, I very much enjoyed the education I just got, and the music was a very nice touch, I thought. But the poem is what I'm looking at. It was, in my opinion, a fine poem. I enjoyed it and the story behind it. Well done!

    Thank you for entering and good luck!!!


    ~.~Yvonne~.~
    Baahltres


  • January 29, 2007

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    Yet another masterwork!

    Yet another masterwork (of course) in the path of these demons, Rusalka is a powerful work, again showing the raw power that these creatures possess.

    You show us her vanity! “O how I love gazing into the still moonlit pool I bask in the reflection of my own radiant beauty”

    Brilliant imagery! “The fire of my emerald green eyes slice thru the blanket of fog as each stroke my brush lends a lustrous sheen to my sedative mane”

    The haunting siren! “My solitary voice waling the irresistible... Symphony of seduction Hypnotically your essence is drawn to me as my succulent breasts impale you in our embrace you are deplumed of will as we immerse… in the watery abyss of lust”

    Then the dénouement! “As the key is to Hades and your eternal damnation!”

    A work of sheer beautified terror!

    BRAVA! BRAVA! BRAVA!



  • Manoura xx
    January 29, 2007

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    where do you get all of these i donno...lyk mythologic...or religios...or whatever ppl from???GREAT JOB ONCE AGAIN!~!!!!!!!!!!BYE!!!!!!!!


  • Fire N Ice
    January 29, 2007
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    FANTASTIC!

    Im in AWE of you,
    this is just WOW!!!!

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