He asks why I like him
might as well ask
why I breathe
maybe tomorrow I won't
breathe
or like him
anymore
maybe tomorrow will bring
no more rainbows
maybe tomorrow
the sky will fall
maybe tomorrow
he will stop
asking useless questions
A contest entry
- Show me the love. by Poetic Aphrodite.
450 points, ended January 31, 2007, 11 entries
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Wonderful
A very touching verse. Truly expresses love in a beautiful way.
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i like your format, it was pretty nice. thanks for entering! ♥in s a t ia b le
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beautiful, I loved it. great job.
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Thankyou for your lovely submittal, Bella
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I like how u did the sripture, and good piece
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