Lovely dunes of silvery-white sand
With waves that curl like beckoning hands
Calls me to the other side
To view the splendor,
Of the ocean's tide~
Inviting waters of a lovely blue- green,
White crested waves
Crowned like a queen
With the waves rolling up on the shore,
Sweeping the seashells into the water once more~
Shimmering sugar-white sands on the beach
Cooled by salt spray and gentle breeze,
Seagulls circling the sky
What a beautiful place,
Waiting for you
Hidden,
Behind silver white dunes~
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Written June 9th, 2003
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How Beautiful - as you. God Bless you Susan.
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Excellent
Hi Susan:
The imagery is great and such a beautiful poem. I really enjoy the imagery you put in your work. Thanks. Bill -
Geez, this makes me wanna go back to Florida, it was so peaceful there, you could just sit on the beach and relax, no one would bother you and no one cared how long you spent just taking it all in. The sound of the waves riding across the sand and beating up against the rocks.. It was the most amazing thing anyone could ever experience. This reminds me of how extraordinary the ocean and beaches could be. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
~*Lynn*~
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Shimmering sugar-white sands on the beach
Cooled by salt spray and gentle breeze... I love these images, Susan. A beautiful, refreshing write.
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Perfection at it's best... relaxing!! Makes me wanna just run out into the waves and bathe in the sun. Extraordinary!!! "Lovely dunes of silvery-white sand
With waves that curl like beckoning hands" Captivating line! Great personification.
Thanks for sharing.
Enjoyed reading your write.
Will continue you to.
-Brandy-
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Awesome
Dude, I'm a beach person, living here in california and all. This totally rocks, I love it. Keep it up! -
ahhhhhh to sit on the dunes and watch the magic of the ocean. Is a beautiful write, as beautiful as the beach itself. just need the saltwater taffy to munch on while enjoying the solitude. have read alot of your works and talented you are. TY for sharing that talent *s*
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You captured the perfect beauty that is my favorite place...the BEACH. Very well done honey. I love it. So pristine.
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hey Susan
lovely serenity in this and its simplicty which takes the reader to its senery so beautifuly.
a water colour to hang in the living room
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Wow, I am on vacation and I want to go to this place right now.....
I can see it so vividly and I think it would be more peaceful and relaxing than the vacation I am currently living.......Splendid piece you have written and share with us all my friend......thanks for letting me know you had new ones posted.....you are on my favs.
thanks.......lisa anne -
Oh this is just breathtaking!!
It takes my mind away ...along the beautiful shore
And the sound of nature and the seagulls flying high in the sky
What a wonderful sound.. the waves of the ocean
This was so peaceful ....Great!! Great!! job on this Susan!
Love~ You!! MinA
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Vivid and beautiful serene imagery created. The picture goes well with your poem. Great work Thanks for sharing...
~Kathy -
Ahhhhh... just like a peaceful day on the beach. FABULOUS! I LOVE IT!
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I want to go roll in the sand please This is really beautiful, I love the beach and laying in the sand and you wrote this so beautifully I want to get in the car and go now hun
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I love the ocean and the shore!
You've made me want to be there once more.
It's been so long, wish I could be
where each day's like heaven, there by the sea.
Beautiful poem, Sis! I Luved it!
Luv you, too!
< 3 Maureen
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OMG susan! this is incredible!
i can imagine you waiting behind the sand dune, for someone... and with a smile and desire on your mind!
heheheh
blessed be
mike -
This makes me wish I lived in Florida....wait! I DO!!!
Beautiful writing, Susan. I love the way you incorporate so many colors to create this tapestry of beauty....I like it!
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this is just lovely. What a breathtaking image you have created here. I love the rhyme scheme you chose and it flowed so well.
really enjoyed
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mesmurizing***********
*Amazing*write, Susan:) Oh, gosh, I wanna go to the beach, so bad now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have my mouth watering, I can smell the salty air, and feel the ocean breezes, whispering through my hair!!!!!!!!!!
Totally beautiful, Susan
Love ya,
Karen
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ohhhh, lovely:) this one didn't have a picture with it, but i could see what you were talking about:) lovely words, lovely imagery:) really perty:)
I loved this, the rhyming was so pretty too:)
(ya, sorry for the repitition, i'm quite hyper right now:P)
kayla*
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