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Doubt

Don’t twist around me
Only fears can smooth
Under creases I ironed in
Better to make them, yourself than let
Times like these do it for you.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    January 31, 2007

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    Doubt can certainly make things tougher - we second guess everything we do, and sometimes end up doing nothing at all. Liked the metaphor you have used in these few lines - well done.