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seeing you

Seeing you would make me wanna cry,
Being with you makes me wanna fly.
I want to be able to hear your heart beat,
Now being here and not there ive suffered defeat.

Your the love of my life and you should know that,
without you im nothing im less then a rat.
I feel like it wont last to long,
i feel like the distance makes everything seem wrong.

Without you here i have no one at all,
It would make it easier to make that last fall.
I dont know what to do anymore,
i feel it my heart is starting to get sore.

I wish everything could change,
we could be together with no range.
I love you and i just need you to know,
You make my heart sing and my sky snow.

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  • B0b
    January 15, 2008
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    is this writen bout me...i just wondering


  • B0b
    February 11, 2007
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    nice write...whos the special girl who this is written bout