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Imagine






Twirling,

          Spinning,
         
                      Flying,




Imagine yourself high in the air,
Nothing below you.



Floating,

          Twisting,



No ones there to judge you,
No ones there to tell you what to do.



Yelling,

        Laughing,

                  Singing,


You have no more worries,
Tomorrow will never come.


Drifting,

          Swaying,

                  Slowing,


Look at yourself,
How do you feel.   


   
Relaxed,

          Peaceful,

                  Calm.













         

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hi, i would like everyone who reads this to tell me how you feel so i can find out if i got the feeling right in this piece.

thanks

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  • thrawn
    September 19, 2007
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    This poem made me feel calmer and sort of dream. A decent piece. Keep it up 'mom'=]