My heartbeat whispers and my eyes feel the pain,
My brain now numb, will I ever again be sane.
Wishing for the impossible, and getting what's real,
Wishing you could see me, to just see how I feel.
Will you ever really listen or ever understand me,
Will you get why I hide, or why I try to flee.
Fighting to no longer cry but to allow a smile,
Fighting to stay calm to be free for a while.
Silently I retreat and try to just dissapear,
Silently I close my eyes and forget what I fear.
Please tell me what you think
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This is deep, the pain you feel in it I hope has pasted. I have not been by your page much so I have a lot to get to with your work. This was short but strong and I hope things are better now lots of love SH

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Man I'm feeling that one big time! Great write! It's where I'm at right now. I was almost thinking this was from God's view for a minute with the line:
Will you ever really listen or ever understand me,
Will you get why I hide.
With all the going on in the world today he must be shedding tears seeing all the drama. But be comforted cuz he knows what you're going through, he's been there! Awesome write!
PEACE! (in your heart)
-B

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wow that was good... i enjoyed reading it...


