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My Fatal Mind

My fatal mind, it works in mysterious ways
I don’t know how to control it
My eyes might see a corpse as it decays
But my mind sees a person who had to quit

Each day it begins to engulf me into its shadows
I fight to gain my true self
But with every waking moment I feel I’m being dragged towards the gallows
My memories haunting myself

The days grow darker
And the nights longer
I find my memories even sharper
And my nightmares stronger

My being slowly begins to cease
This horrifying state
Help me please
Before it’s too late

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  • B0b
    January 29, 2007
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    this is good..i like it