Come with me my dear angel
These bonds will not hinder me
Take my hand and we will escape together
To a land where our love can be free
But I can see your fate
It burns in the air
I can see the future
Yet I can’t see you there
If this is my punishment
If that is my destiny
Dire are the consequence
I don’t care for I love you forever
Please I beg of you
Runaway from me
Quick before they notice
I will not have death be your destiny
I will not move
Not without you
So please…please
Come with me
Then may God forgive me…
A contest entry
- Only Imagination! by AwesomeJoshsome.
525 points, ended February 3, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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This was a lovely piece and I enjoyed reading it. Is it supposed to rhyme or were some of those by coincidence? Just wondering.
It sounds as though there's a conflict of loyalty to the one(s) you love and yourself, but the loyalty to love is winning. It's powerful. Some people don't let love win...
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Great!
This poem is prettiful and made me happier than I started out! Im glad that you entered my contest and I wish you the bestest of luck!
Good Job!
~AwesomeJoshsome~
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