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Grey Angel

I am a Dark Angel
Wishing to be dead
I am a Dark Angel
Filled with dread

I am a White Angel
Trying to cope
I am a White Angel
Flled with lost hope

I am a Grey Angel
My soul withered and worn
I am a Grey Angel
My wings tattered and torn...


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  • Danneh
    May 3, 2008

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    I really liked this piece, but it didn't really explain a lot for me on Trauma kids. But just a note, even grey angels can fly one day.

    -Danneh<3


  • Bruised.Roses
    February 14, 2007

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    this was a great poem for something that was bassed on a character...this was very creative, and powerful..it had a great flow and your wording was awesome..keep rwitting


  • my savior-pedro
    February 12, 2007

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    i loved it!....but, it kinda left us hanging.... lol. thats ok tho. i still liked it. GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!