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Mouse Meat ***

Hunting the garden all ready to pounce
Making my kill no regret not an ounce
Little mouse head makes a noisy crack
Has no chance surviving my attack
The thrill of the big mouse hunt makes me smile
Maybe I will lay down for awhile
Take a nap in the  delicious sunlight
Everything is good, mouse meat excites
But I must admit Catnip is my favorite treat
I like it so much better than greasy mouse meat







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  • Melodies
    June 14, 2007

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    YES!!!

    Catnip!! And this cat tells a wonderful story that is like a storybook adventure! Thank you so much for these adorable lines!


  • individuality gold member
    May 28, 2007
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  • Wolf Dancer
    February 2, 2007
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    Greasy mouse meat yukkkkkkk, this was cute and funny i enjoyed the read


  • individuality gold member
    January 29, 2007

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    throws catnip in the air and runs around your poem. poor mouse, well that's what he gets for being a crack head spill tom and jerry into crazy cartoon shapes and eat someone's steak dinner...


  • Alilly silver member
    January 29, 2007
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    HAHAHA!!! Throw me a leg giggle

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