The howls, blood curtling sent everyone running.
Blood painting the grass, a battle rages on.
A green forest now turning to red.
Terror and horror the blood stained curse of war.
The beast is unleashed on the innocent.
War machine turning and spitting out bodies.
Unreal carnage, such dark horror in the eyes of the world.
A whole tribe wiped out with vengence.
Stained blood raining down on the trees.
Body parts spewing everywhere in this nightmare.
The beast has arrived. The darkest of days draws near.
Soon the genocide will be complete.
Master of evil lirks within this blood soaked valley.
Now draws twilight of the whole human race.
For the beast is OURSELVES! Feeding on all the rage and hate!
Poisoning our every move with vile words and deeds.
Let the blood soaked forest forever weep the blood of our brothers and sisters.
Author notes
This is not for the faint of heart. 18 years of age or older! The carnage in this will send chills down your spine! Very dark indeed.
flowing red embers.
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A contest entry
- The Darkest Day by Baahltres.
2000 points, ended February 13, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Just about ANYTHING goes!!! :D by GuardianPhoenix7289.
600 points, ended February 4, 2007, 53 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - dark prewrites only!!! by Gasp.
660 points, ended February 15, 2007, 28 entries
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very good poem i loved it!! great job
thx for entering my contest!
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WOW bronze trophy winner! Damn good! This contest was awesome and I placed very well indeed! Awesome!! One of my best showings so far! Sweet trophy. Worth it!
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Stop genocide dead in it's tracks!
This piece sure is getting a lot of attention! Good it did it's job! We must fight agianst genocide wherever it shows up. We must make a stand! Time to make a stand for peace and justice for ALL people!! -
Wow!
This IS pretty dark! I mean, I have seen plenty of rather dark writes, but this one is one of the darker. But it also kind of speaks a fact... that humans will only end their race quicker, if they don't stop hating. Good job man!!!
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WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!!
I don't think I have ever seen one like this from you my friend!! This is simply chilling, but fantastic!!! I don't usually read dark pieces, but I am glad I read this!!! I think you have found a strong place with your writings my friend!
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Thank you to all
Thanks everyone for the support! I felt I did a bang up job on this piece. Glad you all enjoyed it. Really wanted to put chills up peoples spines and give everyone something to think about.
Poetry is about painting that picture in the mind. If you can do that clearly your job is done. -
I love it!! so dark and full of meaning... keep it up!
good luck with the contest also!!
wolf
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i like your author's notes. very true. sent chills down my spine. although i would let the 18 years and younger look, for they are the future, and hope that they not follow in the footsteps of the elders that have put us in this situation. lol. playing. good poem my friend! kudos!
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This is undoubtedly true, we ourselves ARE beasts and must realize it before we can save ourselves from it. Dark and gruesome and well done!
Thank you for entering and good luck!!!
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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WOW... almost i am speechless.... this is such a rude awakening in which i agree that we need... you have penned a fantastic write here my friend well done
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