Days go by;
Months pass on.
Love stays near,
Through all of our wrong.
Through thick and thin,
Until the end of time.
Through light and darkness,
You'll always be mine.
Through the fights and lies,
And broken promises.
Through all the anger and hurt,
We still offer forgiveness.
Through my struggles,
Through your past.
We beat the odds,
And made it last.
Through the nights spent alone,
Through the all the time apart.
Through my insecurties, and our rough spots,
Through all the fears of a broken heart.
We started off nervoius and unsure,
And rose...then began to fall.
But we've mended together even stronger,
After 5 months, we've gotten through it all.
Author notes
I wrote this to my boyfriend the night before our 5 months (so before I wrote "His name remains" (my poem b4 this) just fyi...anyways, we have gotten through a lot, for those of you who know me personally (cait, kenzie) you know that...and I haven't written a sappy love poem in a little while, because I don't know, sometimes I think they are overated, but stuff was just good on our anniv....and i hope it stays that way, but he about cried, it was so sweet, anyways, i'll stop rambling...hope you like it.
¤BLONDIE¤
Written: January 24, 2007
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Wow, Kylie,
I must be something special if someone's "pulling a Cait" all the time. Lol, just kidding. This piece was great and your author's comments tied it all together. The passion and love that you and Matt have is rare, don't let go of it without a fight.
- Cait -
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im pulling a cait!`
Im pulling a cait on u: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW! I like this a lot, even though i dont really relate to this, i really liked this stanza:
We started off nervoius and unsure,
And rose...then began to fall.
But we've mended together even stronger,
After 5 months, we've gotten through it all.
Its a good closure to the poem. Great Job!
~kenz~
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beautiful
I really like this. It just shows all through life, and love especially isn't easy, you can survive the rough bits and come out the other side smiling.
Through the nights spent alone,
Through the all the time apart.
Through my insecurties, and our rough spots,
Through all the fears of a broken heart.
I really like this verse.
Real well done!!
bec x.x.x.x.x
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this was a beautiful write my friend form start to fins i enjoyed it thanks for sharing it with us darlin.
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