blamed and shamed for everything i've ever
done, said, thought, wanted.
left alone, without a home, inside a house.
so many things of mine turned into a weapon
empathy, loyaltie, hobbies,friends.
no weapons to fight whats always been.
not sure how to fight against my own
family, lifestyle, history, companions.
to be seen, never heard.
when all i want to do is forbiden
scream, run, cry, hide.
all the tyhings i love with-held.
all of my talents inadequate
loving, laughing, helping, holding.
never enough, never loved.
like a beaten dog i run, to you
hurt, angry, broken, scared.
Author notes
i need halp w/a tittle.
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything by Welcome-To-Hell.
700 points, ended February 16, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hate Me, Kill Me by thorlorn thanatos.
380 points, ended March 30, 2007, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me scream by WanderingCyclone.
460 points, ended June 12, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Really!!!!!! by LuverzTearz.
550 points, ended July 13, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how this makes you feel
Comments
-
I can't say anything more than 'I loved it!' This was an emotional poem. Very outstanding job! Thanks for entering and good luck!
-
This is more of a sad poem then terrifying. I like it. Good luck in my contest.
-
aw this was such a sad write..but nonetheless very well written and powerful..your words were touchging and powerful..you are veyr talented keep writting and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~ -
Yeah im not sure the title fits this write this is a painful write but the title suggest something else but you did a wonderful job on this I think there might be a few spelling errors that need fixed but overall a good write best of luck in the contest
Adding your comment:
