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When He Came

Hold me closely
For I drown
Keep me safely tucked away
For once I venture out
I will betray you

Last night you saw me
Through all the tears
Holding on to my blanket
To calm my fears

But don’t think that you are safe
If I had my way I would say

Though you down
Beat you up
Show you how rough you are

Did you really think
That I would forget
I remember all of this
Don’t you ever think I wont
You hurt me badly
Oh so badly

You took me fast without care
Stole from me my innocence
Took me fast took me hard
Showed me no safe regard

Then you saw what you had done
Arms wrapped around my quivering figure
Tears streamed down my face
Last night I swore to my sweet goddess
That you would pay

With your debt on demand
I ventured off to sleep land

As you lay me by your side
Cursed the heavens for you pride
You say if it weren’t for my damning mouth
This never would have been.

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  • Daniella elizabeth
    January 29, 2007

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    Emotions full of it

    Hey this has alot of meaning in it whats going on or is it just poetry. you know if there is ever something wrong we can talk love ya sis