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The Little Girl by the Swing

I remember a little girl
Standing by the swing
I saw her once
When the birds started to sing

After that
I saw her no more
Ripped from her post
Hearts and emotion raw

And every now and then
I think of her so
And how death came too soon
Knowing not what I want to know

You might have seen her too
Like every other girl the eye does see
The only difference being
That little girl was me

This is the story of my childhood and of how easily that little girl slipped away into the shadows.

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I know the rule was that no persons under the age of sixteen could enter, but I felt compelled to write this poem. I will fully understand if you want to delete it.

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  • Veronica Leigh
    January 30, 2007

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    this is incredibly beautiful. I was just looking at this contest and your title pulled me to read your poem. Beautiful job and very different. I really love this.