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Gone.

Your loving whispers tickle my ear
Warm, caring touches always welcomed
But now...not you're gone...
Unfairly and unjustly snatched away
Giving me no time for a goodbye
Not even just one short farewell

Our seat so lonely and cold
Our music so dead and dull
Our pirctures jaded and painful
Gone forever from reality
Living as a constant reminder
A reminder of your death

I can't forgive you for leaving me
Or the reason of your departure
You were killed for being you
For being brave and outspoken
For helping me learn the possibilities
For being you...being the gay guy

Now everthing is so hard to get through
Without you next to me to guide me
To seek help and assistance
For support and kind love
But they rook your life away
With an unjust rope and knife

As I write these words I feel you
The feelings desert me so soon however
I know I will never meet anyone like you
Anyone as great and wonderful as you
But I will promise you one thing
I won't let them do the same to me

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  • ur gothic 1
    July 16
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    Perfect

    Best ending EVER


  • Borglesnarf
    June 18
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    Wow

    Beautiful,

  • This broke my heart. I have to ask, though, how do you intend to prevent someone from attempting murder? The only solution you have is to defend yourself.

    Hopefully, you will heal over time and grow from your loss. Excellent write. There was one spelling error. I'm pretty sure you didn't mean to say "But the rook your life away".

    Good job.


  • ShaneXCore
    November 13, 2007
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    my god.. im crying just a bt....

  • AngieMae
    February 12, 2007
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    Heartbreaking...

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