y'avai le ciel,le soleil,le vent...
y'avai toi et aussi y'avai moi
y'avai la liberte dans nos yeux,comme un ouragan
y'avai la neige
et le froid qui glace
mais dedans pas de gele et de la peur pas de traces...
y'avai mes montagnes et tes rires
y'avai tes reves et mes souvenirs
y'avai des etincelles de folie dans l'air
et au loin,toute bleue,y'avai la mer...
soudain je dors,j'ai besoin d'un peu de repos,relaxation du corps
et mon ame...elle s'acharne,elle
et mon ame...elle m'entraine loin,elle
soudain ya que toi qui apparait dans mes songes
soudain j'ai trop peur de n'etre qu'un mensonge
tu me demandes toujours si c'est vrai
si tout ce qu'on sens vraiment existe
tu me demandes toujours si c'est vrai
et on a peur,tous les deux,d'etre sur une fausse piste...
y'avai le soleil,le vent,le ciel
y'avai sur ma langue des non dits et un arriere gout de miel
y'avai toi
y'avai eux
y'avai le calme
mais vraiment,pour moi,y'avai que toi...
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french..
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Indeed like elie said, very light..
'et mon ame...elle s'acharne,elle
et mon ame...elle m'entraine loin,elle'
I love the music here.. it feels like ton ame is somehow dancing...
'y'avai toi
y'avai eux
y'avai le calme
mais vraiment,pour moi,y'avai que toi...'
I loved!
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I remember when this title was in the process of fermentation...like grape juice freshly squeezed it was so sweet...and now...when it's all done and it has simmered well...it's hypnotizin...it's like an amazin bottle of wine...U have a sip...n then u want more n more...it becomes addictive...
you make french even more magical than it is...
OoO
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Les aventures de dieu et de l'elephant de glace... (continued)
... not very good english though, that's what you get when you translate french lol.
Suddenly I fall asleep, I need a bit of rest, relaxation of the body
And my soul... it torments me
And my soul... faraway it takes me
Suddenly I see no one but you in my dreams
Suddenly I'm afraid to be nothing but a lie
You always ask me if it's true
If everything we feel truly exists
You always ask me if it's true
And we're afraid, both of us, to be on a wrong track...
There was the sun, the wind, the sky
There was on my tongue unspoken words and a back taste of honey
There was you
There was them
There was the silence
But truly, for me, there was no one but you...
Elie -
...opinions from the french-illiterate perspective. But from Nosferatu's translation, it's one of your beautiful classics, incorporating nature and flaws in society/philosophy in a nicely crafted piece!
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Tellement peur..
very well put together.. this new style of yours is freakingly beautiful!
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... me goin speechless.(which is a miracle)
its true we see nothing but the one we love no matter what and where we are.i feel it too..(sometimes) (rarely) ( but i do) ha33! me love the man u are and the man behind ur words. she's one lucky muse! its very smart to speak of the most magical things in life along with the one u.. as if u are placin her with such celestial heavens.
love ur work. always!
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ur just getting greater and greater
this was just... i duno...
amazing
"et mon ame...elle s'acharne,elle
et mon ame...elle m'entraine loin,elle
soudain ya que toi qui apparait dans mes songes
soudain j'ai trop peur de n'etre qu'un mensonge"
serge this gave me chills..
wow!
~rana~
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Les aventures de dieu et de l'elephant de glace...
There was the sky, the sun, the wind...
There was you and also there was I
There was freedom in our eyes, like a hurricane
There was the snow and the cold that freezes
But inside no frost, and no fear traces
There was my mountains and your laughters
There was your dreams and my souvenirs
There was sparks of madness in the air
And far, oh so blue, there was the sea
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just one thing...in the title itr should be dieu not Dieu in capitals coz that's kinda relative to beliefs and ppl
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Amigo sincerely this was very beautiful, it's like being in a dream of some kind, it flows like a feather, it's very light (on the stomach if I dare say hehe, enno you know what I mean). And of course I won't give you any critical comment cos I don't think I'm good enough for doing it.
Elie
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I'm going to sleep
So I will comment on it later, but all I can say for the time being "it's amazing". And plus tomorrow I can applaud a second time
Elie
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y'avai la foule,le noir, le vent
y'avai la musique ki jouait fort
y'avai toi
y'avai eux
mais vraiment,pour moi,y'avai ke le sentiment de tes bras ki m'enlacent ..
me =*
xxx
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