Soul
swim.
Swallowed whole
with-
in
jabbery jaw
guffaw raw
searchin'...
Spirit;
Can you hear it?
Whispering ...
wise worded/we're dead
life sentences.
Solitaire
existence.
Me mine.
My
mind
mood swing severance
from
burn-hole
soul
swim
soo....thing solitude.
Author notes
Huh...this one was so wierd I got booted from the contest...Hehehe
A contest entry
- Enter Something by naked roots.
300 points, ended February 27, 2007, 5 entries
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Comments
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I like the abstract way this was written. It seems like you removed every word that wasn't important. I don't think there's a single conjunction in this...unless I just didn't catch it.
Nice work, and thank you for entering my contest.
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They don't know true talent when the see it do they? Smiles. But this came from the depths of you and shouted magnificent! Smiles, Terry
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As weird as some might think, it still holds your voice, your thoughts and personal meaning. So keep it anyway
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