I love you, please come back, .
Without u my life will be over
I love all our good times
That we shared by the fire
All our old times
With your loving arm around me
Like the humming birds and there flowers
all our bad times
When we cried cause no one cared
come back, come back
There are minutes still unspent.
With every tear I cry
The memory for you still remains
Please come back I need you, I need you
A contest entry
- Anything and everything! Prewrites allowed by lucy sky-diamond.
1100 points, ended February 6, 2007, 84 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a very heartfelt poem, with a good flow, however a bit simplistic. thank you very much for your entry, and good luck
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
I could actually feel the emotion in this poem. An excellent piece, you’ve voiced yourself very clearly; I think that sometimes we just need to pour the words out and hopefully that will aide us in healing. Nicely done
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Awww wow i liked this poem. It reminded me of how i felt a few months ago. Kind of. I loved it.. im sure many people can relate.
Well donee.. x
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