Chatty and bright that day
So much to hear and plenty to say.
Planning the next day ahead
not dreaming she would be dead.
She sat at the table next day
and still had a little to say.
But instead of a feed
a cerebral bleed..
made her precious
life flutter away.
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This may not be what you want, as it's not very profound, but it is true and happened a couple of days ago to a resident where I work as a carer. There one minute and gone the next!
A contest entry
- 1000 points: The Grim Reaper by Lj-.
1000 points, ended February 2, 2007, 23 entries
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A nice quick way to go. It does seem a little lighthearted but I suppose if you are in constant scearios like this, when the grim reaper becomes a familiar presence, his power of dread is reduced
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Way to Go...
Well, I guess when your number is up, the best way to go is QUICKLY. I've nursed many folks who've died long, lingering deaths and given the choice, sudden and fast is what I'd choose!
This is a sad little piece, but it treats the subject with dignity. Good stuff..
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I like this piece. It's very simple, but good. I'm sorry to hear this is true.
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