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Stars

The stars up
above us
we know they stare down on us
Will they move from their
spot
Stars look down on us
we wish
upon them!
For they are stars

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  • Diatribes
    November 4, 2007
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    They almost seem eternal and godlike sometimes don't they.


  • Lauren Noir
    February 5, 2007

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    Wonderful job!
    Thank you for putting it on the reading list
    It was a sweet and kind of deep write, with a lot of meanings that can be delved into

    Well done