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Waterfront

I bask beneath the hidden night
  while fingers caress the land
A marvelous symphony
  on strings of coconut palms

Lights blend with the music
  and heaven's brush creates
  a myriad of images
  laid on the sea's onyx canvas

Shores gave their applause
  as the climax commences
Awestruck, I remain
  soaking in all the spectacles

This show is far from over
The next act has only begun

Author notes

Option #3 The Winklings Multi-Challenge Round One!
~written on January 28, 2007 – 8:06 PM
~posted on my blog and DeviantArt Page

A contest entry

One wonderful night in January while visiting one favorite seaside spot

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  • Frodofan
    February 16, 2007

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    I like the finish. Very interesting. A nice choice of words as well. Thanks for entering the Winkling contest.


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 30, 2007

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    Can hear, see and feel the excitement you are experiencing at this evening at the beach - lots of entertainment yet to come. Interesting way you have used space in the various verses.