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We'll Drown Ourselves In Liqour, Sweetheart..

Baby, addiction looks so bad on you, you wear it like last year's suit, and accessories are all that count [all-over arrogance and a sprinkle of doubt]. There's no hope in this dirty-pretty scene, the pop of champagne corks, [life's lost its sheen].

Neon Skies Burn Down [the sky is falling] You Still Wear Your Princess' Crown [death is calling] Don't You Care? Don't You Care At All?

Baby, your smile's as hollow as your head, who's gonna remember your face when you're dead, and you do it to yourself, but you know that all too well, and you're flying too close to the light, [remember last time you fell?]

Neon Skies Burn Down [the sky is falling] You Still Wear Your Princess' Crown [death is calling] Don't You Care? Don't You Care At All?

Popular's a calamity and your lips feel dry before they crack and bleed, you know it's not right, you know you can't stop, the press are all over, waiting for you to drop. You want those simple days, but they've all gone now, stay young forever, but there's only so much time will allow.

Neon Skies Burn Down [the sky is falling] You Still Wear Your Princess' Crown [death is calling] Don't You Care? Don't You Care At All?

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  • makeout kid
    January 29, 2007
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    you.are.amazing.
    && i lo0o0o0ve yo0o0u.
    ♥


    • ohemeegeeay
      January 31, 2007
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      Lo0o0o0o0o0oveYarr, sweets.

      Noise&&Kisses

      [[and this fleeting butterfly we call talent is nothing compared to Y..O..U..]]

  • RottenXHeartX
    January 29, 2007
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    "All over arrogance and a sprinkle of doubt" I love it. X


  • sweetpearl
    January 28, 2007

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    I like the repetition as well (sounds good and written well) but I loved these lines:

    "Baby, your smile's as hollow as your head, who's gonna remember your face when you're dead"

    --superb. Oh I'd love to hear this played out. Awesome.


  • Ohlympia
    January 28, 2007

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    Wow...

    This was a m a z i n g. I love the repitition of:

    "Neon Skies Burn Down [the sky is falling] You Still Wear Your Princess' Crown [death is calling] Don't You Care? Don't You Care At All?"

    && you pulled off the rhyming extremely well. Absolutely wonderful.

    ♥♥♥[ms.oblivion]

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