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this man

Oh... my... G-d...
What has become of me?
I think in poetry
When I think of this man
This man, this man

My heart rises through my eyes
Like the tides, like seasonal rains
Flooding the Nile, rising high
And I choose not to hide

This is my friend in his strength
His compassion, his greatness
His gentleness a song of praise
His temperate wisdom

This is my friend
This man, this man
Jonathan

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  • hose30
    January 28, 2007
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    Wow. this was great. This man seem very special. If you express such sentiment like this about him. great write. It made me fell all mussy inside. good job. Can you give me feedback on my poem Love of my life.

  • PalmettoSky
    January 28, 2007
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    this is a great piece of work! very complex and the meaning is deep rooted!
    You're wording was phenomenal in this piece and the over-all poem was extraordinary. You also incorporated nice imagery, and it was an extraordinary read.