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Solitude

Silent tears flow.

Deep in a heart,

Full of love,

Forced to wait.



Flitting moments

Bring temporary smiles

Yet yearning still remains,

Hunger growing stronger.



Looking aorund,

All have their hearts.

Yet mine,

Still is so far.



Saddness great,

Takes over my soul

Clinching it tighter,

Never to let go.



Like a scolded child,

I sit alone.

Arms wrapped around me,

The only comfert to be found.



Solitary comfinment,

Not wanting to be found.

All in the same breath,

Wanting to be rescued from this hell.



Playing in the catacombs

Of shadows,

Webs of memories

Fall upon my head.



Remining me of sweetness,

Softness in a loving touch,

Nights of passionate beauty,

All these I miss so much.



Perhaps it is I,

That put myself in this personal hell.

To break the razord chains,

To walk with my head held high,



Is only to dream,

In this dungeon of mine.

Dusty, blood stained walls,

For now are my home.

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  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    November 26, 2007

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    Good as always!

    I will come rescue you hun! -Runs in with his sword held high busting threw a stone wall and slams his sword down on the chains to try and brake them.-


  • Red Devil
    November 15, 2007
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    Excellent

    Still putting out excellent writes I see. I feel this this one. Keep up the good work!


  • Georges silver member
    January 29, 2007
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    Applaud

    The silence of solitude allows the emotions to become divided and the realisation that we are not meant to be alone. Solitude stifles the love emotions and tempers the dark. Excellent poem that is reflecting your mood at the minute. Love from your Gramps.
    Georges.


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    January 28, 2007
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    hun this is a great write I could feel your pain and I know whence it comes from. Hold in there and things will get better or so I am told. I am here if you need or want to talk just holler out and I will answer. Good write. As Always.

  • hose30
    January 28, 2007

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    great emotion. great write. I could feel your words.You are a poet ans well as a writer. good job. Can you give me feedback on my poem Love of my life.

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