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I'm Sorry...

im sorry for who i am
im sorry i never changed
im sorry all it seems i ever do
is bring my loved ones pain

im sorry im a wimp
im sorry i am weak
im sorry im ashamed
im sorry im a freak

im sorry i have no self esteem
im sorry this is old
im sorry i cant help it
im sorry im so cold

im sorry i am losing
im sorry that im broken
im sorry im an emo
im sorry that i sin

im sorry all these words
are blurring as i write
im sorry im all the things im called
im sorry everyones right

im sorry i cant love
im sorry i am numb
im sorry that im jealous
im sorry that im dumb

im sorry im not good enough
im sorry that im scared
im sorry for ever living
im sorry that i ever dared.




~Madi~

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  • xXbroken lullabyXx
    July 4, 2007

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    this is good, but don't ever be sorry for who you are, if ppl don't accept you then that's their problem..but awesome write, i really liked it


  • AnnaJayne silver member
    June 13, 2007

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    Very good.

    Oh wow.

    I really like this poem...mostly because it is how I am feeling at the moment. So many people will be able to relate to this hun. I really enjoyed reading this poem!

    ~AnnaJ xXx


  • Malachi Nightbreeze
    February 7, 2007

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    Y are you sorry? We all have been given the chance to be something great and we all have our own gifts. You should never be sorry for who you are inside. There is only one you and you are that one. On a side note: This reminded me of "Better Version" by Shinedown.

    Fyi: The rhyme seems a bit forced and difficult to follow. Maybe some rewording would help it out a bit.

    Blessed be you on your path,
    Angel Levi


  • Summer Dawn
    January 29, 2007

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    i know you have alot of things here, i think that just for the sake of the poem maybe in my opinion a little rewording to bring out the sadness of it, maybe. it seems like you are feeling like you have failed in many ways in yourself, but you have alot to learn, so dont beat yourself up too bad now. i think there are too many sorry's here, but overall its very deep emotions shared. hang in there.

                       


  • MadisonRae
    January 28, 2007
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    good words

    i liked i. simple but meaningful. by the way, ur not any of those things and even IF u were, you shouldnt be sorry for the way God made you.


    Madison

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