To Ponder? or Wander? along the Long, Lonely Road
of my Soul's Mind is the Question... and Should
I Choose to Play the Role of Guide, which Road
will I take?
Broken, Choked out Dreams which litter the Ground,
Fall from the Skies, Raining like the Heavens
were Crying Tears of Sulfur, Burning and Turning
the Angels away from the Path of the Raptured
Warriors...
With the Young Man staring at the Words, not
truly knowing how to read them, he gets
Discouraged, I stare into his Deserted Eyes as
he struggles to Break the Code...
"Doom!! Doom!! Death and Doom!! will Follow you
down that Path, Should you take it... They'll
Follow you, All your life.."
So I chose to take The Road of Despair, Knowing
once I step, never will I be able to step back.
To Try to solve The Puzzle of Unanswerable
Questions is the Mission...
The Men of Many Handshakes will Bite
at you with Iron Teeth.
Would you like to See this in a poetry book
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That was so amazing but very sad. I know exactly how you feel. But cheer up my friend things will get better! Keep it up... Stacey:
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Its been a long time. But I've been keeping my self buisy going to school. Anyways, This was really awesome. Keep it up! Stacey
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I think in this case, it might help to have more notes on where you're going with the piece, as if feels somewhat more obscure (as another poet commented) than perhaps it needs be, or perhaps a condensation of a larger work. It is very well written with interesting choices of wording that are compelling, but I'm left feeling a bit lost...
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Too deep
I felt good reading this but had to work too hard deciphering the meanings. I'm a little lazy and that is not your fault. Thanks for the thoughts and words. -
nice very deep the world is an interesting place people ride the vehicles of life an i like to think of us poets as the drivers.
"Doom!! Doom!! Death and Doom!! will Follow you
down that Path, Should you take it... They'll
Follow you, All your life.."
i have to say that this is my fave line.
(oh and if i misinterpreted it i'm sorry its wat i get for being sleep deprived)
awsome write hope to read more soon
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