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Love Will Always Win

Sitting on the bathroom floore,
She can't take this any more,
She can't take the lies,
Or the way he makes her cry.

She hopes he won't find her like this,
Because she knows exactly what he'd say[DO!!]
And she knows that there'd be hell to pay.

She picks herself up from the floore,
And stumbles to the mirror,
She sees the hand print on her face,
And the bruise on her cheek,
[The slits on her wrist]
Standing over the sink,
She feels like a disgrace.

They had all warned her,
Told her to leave him,
And what a terrible person he had been[AND IS]
But teenage rebellion got the better of herm
Now her life is hell on earth,
And it hurts,
She hurts herself,
To make the pain from his blows,
Fade,
Shurely this is not the life she chose.

She runs towards the doore,
As he walks in,
He grabs her by the waist,
And throws her to the floore,
He tells her to get up,
Panics when she doesn't,
A pool of blood engulfed her,
The knife meant for him,
Had gone through her heart.

A nighteen year old was found dead,
On her boyfriend's floore,
Was what the police reports said,
A man now missing,
Would never be found again,
Mothers don't miss when they piont their guns.

Love will allways when,
Even though this story may not make any sense.

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  • ladyXmanny
    January 28, 2007

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    OMG>...

    This is amazing! wow i'm sitting here reading this in tears. it was so amazing. this is one of the best poems i've read in a long time. very good job. WoW! thank-you for writting this.