Perfect in every way
Eager to talk every day
Relief at your voice
Forever and ever is our choice
Eternal love does exist
Compiling your traits in a single list
Taken for granted every day
I only have one thing to say
Opening the walls to let you through
Never doubting that love is true
A contest entry
- SHOW ME LOVE by imprisioned soul.
450 points, ended February 8, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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very nice and so beautiful... another great write... you are very expressive and that is good..
-tabbykat -
ahhhh
ahhh..this one is really sweet....i like the rhyme scheme a lot...it worked very well in this particular poem...it shows a lot of emotion..i got an overwhelming sense of love and devotion to a certain person...they are very lucky to have some one love them like you do...great write... -
daddy!
loved it <3
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