Feelings
For you are strong
My heart beats just for you
Hidden behind this flowered chain
My Love
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For My Almost Everything
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Hidden behind chains of love...we all have chains we need break out of---Love is one of the greatest that we hide behind refusing that it exists ...for many see love only as a pleasure of the night only not ever-lasting!
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i have not read a cinquain in ages, a good reminder to me here how nice they are to read, maybe i will write another one one day, a good piece, full of love and smiles.
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Stunning Writing
You know this is very very beautiful. It is short but holds a certain mystique about it. Wonderful writing here. Absolutely breathtaking. Well done
Wayne
xx
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very profound.
ang
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Oh my what a beautiful short beauty
Thank you for entering
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i adore the cinquain form, maybe because i am so simple and the form is easy to grasp - the difficulty for me is the follow-thru, i muff it so many ways and so admire well constructed ones like this one. Very nice indeed. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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Short & Sweet
Very direct write!! More than one meaning to this write is eminent. I can see many feelings and thoughts behind the words chosen in this excellent poem. Very good job of drawing in your reader, Don
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This is so sweet and beautiful.
Well done Jen.
A delight to the eye and the mind.
Jeannie
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this is really different from all the other love peoms i've read, good job!
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Interesting things to related, the chain and the flowers - unusual combination to work with, but this has worked out so well in these line of this conquain. Thanks for commenting on my poem earlier today.
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Iron and roses what a unique combination--you have many hidden talents to be tapped into
the Satyr
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an exelent write , if this is for your almost everything i am afraid you have left nothing for the rest!
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This is for your almost everything but it HAS everything So much said in so few words and a picture to perfect the imagery
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You entered my Master's contest (Tattboy) and I was so taken in with your excellent entry, that I had to check out something else that you had written - I'm glad I did - u do write exceptionally well
Bravo!
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You did this wonderfully you have become very skilled at writing cinquains and this showcases your talent wonderful job very well penned
Bravo
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Nice
Short & sweet & delicious
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POWERFUL POEM!
Just a few words but they express so much.
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very short
but it sure hits the spot... very romantic indeed. The picture is beautiful as well as the poem.
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how beautiful
simple and elegant as always.. I am not even really sure what a cinquain is, but it seems you've nailed it. lol good luck in the contest.. Kassie -
I like it. It's a spectacular length. Well done on this. It is hard to write very long, or very short poems. I take my hat off to you! Well done
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You'll always be my sexy smile.....
from one almost everything to another.... I think of you on a daily basis, your smile, your laugh, the way you would feel in my arms, feeling each other, almost as though one. Yes I do miss my little sexy smile, a big part of my heart does & always will belong to you. I don't have much of one to share either, so believe me, thats a big chunk! O:-) one way or another, I'll always be around for my sexy smile should she ever need me... lots of love, the unmissable one.... xxx ;-)
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