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The Noodle Snake

Behond the foogle
Deep down south
Lies a noodle
But not near mouth

Nobody knows
Why it lies there so
Uneaten by the black crows
Uncovered by the white snow

Sometimes I watch it
lying there
But after I while though
I discontinue my stare

If do ever see it there
You may start to shake
And try not to step into it's lair.
Do not disturb The Noodle Snake.

Author notes

Sorry it's so stupid.

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  • AwesomeJoshsome
    January 28, 2007

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    OMG AMAZING!!

    THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS ASKING FOR! I LOVE IT! It might just be a shoe-in if people don't start understanding how perfect I think this type of nonsense is! GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT WRITE!