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Loyalty beyond death

Bullets and fire rain down upon me,
Yet still I march on,
This war will not take me,

I'll charge the front lines,
I'll never back off,
I'll come down like hell's flames on all who oppose you,
All who bring you down, make you cry, lose sleep, and even look at you funny,
Will wish they never met me.

Cause I'm loyal beyond the end of time,
It's in my blood,
And I'll protect you with all I have,
And you'll never fall from grace.

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to everyone i love. blue, cap'n, and the crew. i'm forever loyal.

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  • captaincrazy
    January 30, 2007

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    thanks for the shout out up there. ^^ i am happy to know that i gots a friend and sister like you. haha..you're a 2 FOR 1 DEAL!!!!!!!! heehee. great poem by you as usual.


  • kjfergus
    January 28, 2007
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    Geez, people are on fire! Lots of good writing. I really like this one!

    Awesome!

  • Paradise Prisoner
    January 28, 2007
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    great write ,jeis.