My baby there is something you should know; about me…
Before you go home, all though we’ve been kickin’
it for a while.
Whenever you need me,
I’ll do what I have to do make it through to you,
however, I might not always be ready too.
That doesn’t mean I don’t love you,
however, sometimes I wonder if I have been misunderstood .
I have to tell you, I want to tell you
some days I can be lazy but I’ll try not too.
When it comes to my emotions,
I am not always an honest person.
Right now are you sure that you love me,
but are you ready to know everything about me?
Spinning in circles around and around,
around the subject we go.
My baby so much can happen before tomorrow,
I’ll try to think about what I say, before I speak,
I know my words aren’t always positive.
Whatever you give me,
I'm going to try to give you something new
not something used.
Whenever you need me,
I'm going to try to make through to you,
however, I might not always be able too…
So what’s bothering you?
I have to tell you, I want to tell you
I can be crazy, but I don’t mean to.
I am usually not a happy person,
what if I am not ready to get married yet?
Is it okay if i'm not always in the mood to talk?
Spinning in circles around and around,
around the subject we go.
I hope I am not being misunderstood,
Because I need to ask you, something I wanna know about you.
Sometimes you can be shady about what you been going through.
There’s been days when you haven’t been an honest person.
You say you do love me,
could that be why you keep so much from me?
Turn the conversation around,
around and around we go.
So right now are sure that you love me,
but are you ready to know everything about me?
Spinning in circles around and around,
around the subject we go.
A contest entry
- Help Me Express It by Heavenly Angel.
550 points, ended June 18, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - GIVE ME YOUR HM FOR A CHANCETO WIN GOLD by esroddo.
450 points, ended September 21, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love your write like a confession and truth tale. Sometime we think we know the one we love only to find out we or they have so many secrets untold. Great write wonderfully expressed. thanks for entering


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Oh yeah..very expressive

You wrote a lot of what I'm feeling and in that, it is awesome
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest!!! -
I have to say... I liked it. It seems very lyrical and strait to the point, in a round about way (lol)
I enjoyed the honesty and the ease of the write.
Good Job.
~MotherMachineGunn~ -
this is a really wonderful write. please be sire to put the option, and thanks for entering =)




