Such a wonderfully twisted maze I weave myself...
A light ahead oh please, be my light ahead...
No, just another train
Another fucking train
Whispers in alabaster haunting
A simple line,
A tangled string...
Wander, wander; little girl
Don't get lost, Alice
In your own maze, Alice
Its not a fortress
Welcome to wonderland
Your gridiron cage of solitude
And oh, a light,
(Move away from the light)
So safe in this puzzle
In the dark...
But
That light...
Get out of the way.
Jump out of the way
Jump - Jump
Can't get out of the way,
Jump....
And there's the train.
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This was pretty amazing. When I was reading your authors page I was instantly reminded of my friend Cacaophony Of Chaos, who writes poetry just like you. Your poetry is very twisted and lovely to read. I enjoyed it.
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My, thank you so much for your lovely comment and applause. I fear the site had not notified me I had a new comment here untill today so I appologise if I have seemed rude or stand-offish in anyway. I truely appreciate it.
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Muriel
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ha ha ha I think it's very awesomely creepy that you put Alice in your poem...that's wicked creepy. Lol Lewis Carroll...was such a strange character. Doing drugs and writing a creepy ass " childrens story "
ah Muriel...I heart your awesome poetry.
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Why thank you! hehehe I have a small infatuation with Alice in Wonderland. She appears alot in my poetry, as does the white rabbit and the cheshire cat... Hehehe...
Thank you so much for the applause too!
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Muriel
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