As you blossom into a beautiful flower, please do not forget your roots.
A contest entry
- let's do that again! by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended January 27, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shorter The Better! by My Darkness.
400 points, ended July 4, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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so true, we always need to remember where we come from, and give thanks to those who helped to shape the people we are today... great write and good luck!
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This is a very good write you penned Mouse, describing the beauty of a rose in just one line, we should never forget our roots and where we came from. Congratulations on the Bronze win a well deserved win I am sure
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Thank you for you comment on this poem. A while back I was thinking about deleting this one, but since it has received so many comments, I kept it. Thanks again.
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Beautiful sentiments, indeed, my Friend...Congratulations on your bronze chalice. Well done. Wanda
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some beautiful words you would want to tell your children. nice.
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Congratulations on winning the Bronze! This was lovely!
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One never should forget
the apple falls not far from the tree.....especially if love is shared and expressed.....this is a lesson of life we learn when we get older.....yet seemingly dont understand when we are young....great write..
Mal
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Thank you for such a thoughtful comment.
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Real nice!
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Thank you very much for you comment.
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Lovely!
Very sweet and well done!
Cris
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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Oh...this is my favorite so far!
good luck in the contest dear, this is just precious!
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Thank you for such kind words. It means alot.
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Oh, so perfect... actually what I was thinking, but could not get the words to form right, so I did something else. I love this! You did it beautifully. Good luck!
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Thank you for such a nice comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Thoroughly.
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Strong words so beautifully penned... x Butterfly.
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Thank you for your comment. Also, thank you for this contest. It's refreshing.
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