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Solitude

In a clear blue sky
A lone hawk circles slowly
Graceful arcs of swirling wings
So soothing to a tortured eye

In an endless meadow
Green grass sways in a breeze
Purple flowers blossom
Their scent wafting on the wind

On the edge of a shady forest
A rustling sound is faintly heart
Before a small deer appears
It stops, looks, and then disappears

On a moonlit beach
The ocean waves crash
Then lap gently at the sand
The sweet smell of salty water fills the air

Atop a snowy mountain
Crisp clean cold air causes tingling
Amazing inspiration
While watching frosty breath

All these places, so unique
Are all so much alike
All provide the relaxation
To the worlds weary souls

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I don't like the ending, I've changed it several times, but it doesn't seem to want to work.

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