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I'm Flying !

Gliding -sliding- my body floats
Hidden feet- rhythmic beat- they move quickly
Arms swaying wildly from side to side
Eyes popping in/out-stretching wide
Mouth wide open-without a sound
I'm flying all around
I'm flying- but my feet are on the ground!

A contest entry

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  • AwesomeJoshsome
    January 27, 2007

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    AHH!

    Hey good entry! DONT FALL! flying is good very fun! We'll see if its fun enough for a trophy a little later though