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Redemption Sky Ways

Dropping tears from heaven
feathers falling from angel wings.

Hear the whimpers of heavens silky cry,
as feathers of angel's wings are wrestling
like sparows through an icy rain.

bagging feathers,
while travling the heavy skyways of redemption.

Climb through the rain,
to heavens forgiving king.

return to angels
the freathers they threw away.

Ataching them again with the promise,
of following the king.

Bring the sun
with the display of every vow.

Soar with the wings of a secret angel
to your distinguished test
in the life of living for Jesus Christ.

Author notes

Um idk i might change this later, sorry i haven't wrote anythign lately and this is all i could squeez out of me. Well it kinda fell out but yea so i tried to make it atleast some what promising.

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  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 27, 2007

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    Great write my friend. I truly enjoyed this write. God bless you in all that you do. Hope to talk to you later on. Keep the faith and keep penning. You are always in my prayers.

    in Christ Jesus,

    Tabitha
  • darlee77
    January 27, 2007

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    very good

    I wouldn't change a word. It is well written and very sincere and touching. I really like it. Darlee77