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Poison Green Eyes

So delicious and cold
your poison green eyes:
i want to snatch you up and
eat you alive.
I’m melting like sugar,
faithless and blind.
I’m slipping into
the verdure and brine,
soft as a sigh and
heavy with sleep.
Pulling me, pulling me
i’m never too deep.
The thought of you;
i want to scream
but i’m drowning in
a poisonous sea.
I miss the kiss of
your snake-oil eyes,
nothing to save me to-night.

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  • dying-gothic-roses
    February 3, 2007
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    wow i love this and i have green eyes to boot lmfao but it is a very captivating poem and i can picture it being read very fast
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