People say that suicide is wrong,
don't do it, it's not right.
But people don't understand,
the pain I’m in each night.
My mother hates me,
my dad never gets involved,
and I see only one way,
for my problems to be solved.
Get rid of them all,
by taking my own life.
It really doesn't matter;
weather its gun, poison or knife.
Tonight’s the night I want to do it,
after everyone has gone to bed,
they will wake up the next morning,
and I’ll be laying down dead.
Although I doubt they will notice,
and if they do, I doubt they will care,
my mom will be upset,
that she never got to hit me one last time,
she will say that it's unfair.
So these are my last words,
right before I died,
my thoughts only take up half a page,
good-Night and good-bye!
Author notes
Just wanted to let everyone know that this was my way for me to get some.. bad feelings out. I don't actually think like this, i just needed to write something depressing.. to.. well to cheer me up.. If that makes sence to anyone XP
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Very dark, very depressing, but beautifully written, you have a way with rhymes young lady! I myself, love to write with rhymes. This was great!
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OMG, i really love this poem but it deffintely is depressing but i really enjoy this poem but i really hope this isnt the way you think because there are people who care regardless of your parents, people do love you so please do not end your life so early and put people through so much pain in any case it was a good poem and i love it.
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I like the line 'My thoughts only take up half a page'. I hope you feel better now X
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