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Unlucky night

My great friend called me
The very bad night
He told me that he need help
He told me that she left
He told me that he did something
That he will regret
I spent the next day with you
You were in the hospital
You came home that night
We talked and you said it was fine
If I move back in with you
Then we came into some problems
That ment I couldn't stay
I was left out in the cold
You called me at 2am and said all was fine
You left her this time
You said I could still move in
In the end all was ok for me to live with you
But the problem still goes on
You want her back
You can see all she is doing is playing games
Why go back to that
I don't want you hurt
I will kill her
Just because she hurt you
Don't play the game anymore
Its just going to keep going on
I don't want you to get hurt
For I have hurt you once

Author notes

This is about Dan he is getting into this girls game and I will hurt her is she hurts him again.

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    March 18, 2007

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    Um hun, it sounds like he's doing it to you too. He can't say you can stay then change his mind so many times.

    Hoping you are well

    Your sis.

  • Time focus on Me
    January 28, 2007

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    hey wuts up i love every line of this poem and its amazing and beautiful job well done and written. way to go with this poem. I know how ya feel with this poem keep up the marvelous work and keep da ink flowing. way to go bravo bravo. take care ttyl