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The Not so Cordinated Elf

Oh was the elf happy to be given a sword
But when he tried to hit a man, everyone else laughed and roared
Then the elf filled with dread
When he learned he hit a tree instead

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for the group Elf Forest as I rise into the ranks of a true Elf

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  • Eusebius
    March 26, 2007
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    bravo

    Ho, ho, ho, funny stuff here, indeed...well and deftly done...bravo...bravo...bravo...


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 24, 2007

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    lol, this is good, i like this, you did a great job on this,lol, lol, just funny, keep it flowing and congrads on moving up a rank


  • MoonlightBeam
    January 27, 2007
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    great

    This is a good poem. I really like it.


  • Amera gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    (curtsey) Well done m’Lady, you now know what the Clerihew spell is and you are an official elf. You now have magical powers and will live forever.

    Your elf name is: Enelya Lossëhelin

    You are in charge of the furry creatures in the forest and we will giving you more spells to cast soon. Love Princess Amera