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Fall

I started up so high,
But that doesn't mean anything,
Except I will fall longer, and
Hit harder when I reach the

Ground, I fall, I
Land, I
Break every bone in my body.

For hours, and
hours I lie alone,
Not dead, but
Not quite alive.

Who will notice?
When the ink runs out,
And the blood
has dried.
Who will
remember


Me

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This is a slightly weird poem that I wrote. I'd love any comments on it!

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  • Dove
    February 1, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    I could actually feel the emotion in this poem. An excellent piece, you’ve voiced yourself very clearly. Nicely done I’d like to take this opportunity to welcome to the site! If you have any questions or need any assistance please don't hesitate to send me or any greeter an IM or click on the help tab at the top of your screen. Dove